Sienna join (plweeease

[sienna]

Just the basics;
Pay attention.

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Name:Sienna
Age: 5 months 2 weeks 3 days
Breed:[/b 3/4 Caspian 1/4 Draft (yep, the rare breed, its just to awesome) (and I used 4th so its easy
Gender:Filly

You think you know me;
Think Again.

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Dark or Light:Light.
Height:I think 11 hands, since I am a foal, I am not very good at hands
Color:Blood Bay

This is how I am;
On the inside.

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Personality:

* Kind
* Shy
* Funny
History:Her herd was captured by humans when she was very young, she ran away but was also captured, she was blindfolded and she felt things placed on her back, a cold thing in her mouth and a slap on her thigh. A weight was followed as she lead into a dirt area, she had the blindfold taken off and craned her neck to see a brat on her back and her amazing coat, dusty now, in a ringed area. In anger she bucked, up and down. The kid bounced off. She was then slapped and blinded, placed in a cold place and the blindfold was off. All she saw were rows of horses, she sighed and started to knicker softly. She wanted her mom. Then a whinny was sounded next to her. No worries. That old gray dapple mare said. No worries. She said her name was Willow and she became my foster mother. One day she kicked and bucked and knocked her door off, then she used her teeth to the locks, which were simple bars that didn't fit both round hoop things on the wall and on the door, after all horses were free a Frisian black male kicked the wall down. I urged her to come but she said she was too old, so I went along. Then after a few weeks she was starving and hurt and tired and she landed here
Mother & Father:She has none, but needs one

Almost finished;
You still with us?

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Herd:With Montana Gold
Other:
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[breyercrazy]

Most of it looks good, except a 5 month old horse is too young to be ridden.
Also, i believe a hand is about 4 inches. Other than that, it looks about perfect.

If you correct the riding part (and remember, there are NO humans! No humans, anywhere. Not for 200 or so years, have there been humans.), i'm sure your foal will be accepted. Once you are, you can stay with my light mare and newborn foal if you like. Unless you get stolen away.

Oh, and remember Caspians are a small breed. A fine choice for horse.

[sienna]

Thank you so much, I guess you will answer my post to your foaling. And thank you, you have given me a gift thank you. Oh and on the small thing, I am only a tad above average caspian hieght, because her grandfatther on her fathers side was a draft, he was bred in captivity with a pure caspian mare, and her father was born with his fathers wildness, and he escaped and bred her mother and gave birth to her brothers, then she was the youngest and the only daughter, her father taught her alot so yea, a little history, I will be only slightly larger then the average pony size, I met a real one before, I call them Porserys, a pony horse, her name was Bunny, a soft, mare with a scar in her forehead, I will pm you all the details about her and we shall marvel

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Okay a few things wrong. Good idea for a Caspian though!

1) 6 hands is kinda short for a foal. They are at least 9 hands when born. If you add 5 months, add a couple more (like around 11 hands.)

2) That picture is of a Bay horse. There is no 'amber' for horses.

3) Can you re-do her history please? More details, add fluff!